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Just One by ~bingeandpurge:iconbingeandpurge:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Just one more day.
Just one more run.
Just one less pound.

He won't love you anymore
If he cuts himself on your ribs.
Your hipbones.  Your shoulderblades.

Just one more purge.
Just one more cry.
Just one less size.

It is never enough.

If you cut your hair, you might lose a few ounces.
If you cut your flesh, you might lose a few inches.
How much fat does bleeding burn?

Counting calories like cards
But the house always wins.
©2005-2009 ~bingeandpurge
:iconbingeandpurge:

Author's Comments

It's about Eating Disorders, obviously.

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:iconariallure:
~ariallure Sep 3, 2005, 6:20:13 PM
... I ... love ... this ...

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kim
:icontripp:
~tripp Nov 17, 2005, 5:25:55 AM
you should write more often.

because this is fantastic work.

:clap:


take care
:iconstar-watcher:
~Star-Watcher Mar 18, 2006, 4:45:01 AM
I Agree
A Really Great Write & You've Asked Questions Things Most People Going Through This Ask!! Well Done :clap:

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Clubs:
*assorted-nuts: [link]
~dysmorphics: [link]
=The-Red-Envelope: [link]
:iconsweet-venom:
~Sweet-Venom Mar 20, 2006, 11:15:45 AM
It's definitely brilliant, insightful and so emotionally detached. I love it.

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... said I.

I'm really easy to get along with once you learn to worship me.

"So are you the good guy or the bad guy?"
"Neither, I'm the good looking stranger who turns up to be good looking and mysterious and nobody quite knows my motives."
:icondollsfall:
~dollsfall Mar 23, 2006, 7:27:35 PM
very well composed. this shows a knowledge of beats and rhythms. like running.

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:blackrose: the stars are butterflies, to drink the nectar from my veins, drain the blood tonight. :blackrose:
:icondarkobsession86:
=DarkObsession86 Mar 31, 2006, 9:04:36 AM
in the darkness
this is understood

its pain and hatred and love



[the words mean much, and are amazing]

--
Commissions + Gift Art + Inspirations
:iconand-she-cries:
~and-she-cries Apr 29, 2006, 1:49:54 PM
I feel this... :+fav:

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Some hearts,
start broken.
:iconacier:
~Acier May 28, 2006, 6:13:05 PM
this is sooo good :D

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×××
.freedom.looked.vicotrious.
.but.no-one.was.expecting.
.the.outcome.on.that.baseball.diamond.
×××
:iconxrockxhardcore:
~XrockXhardcore Jun 5, 2006, 8:59:09 PM
This is amazing. and i know exactly what you mean. great job

-meg <3

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Im Melting, In your eyes, like my first time , that i caught fire...
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